Script Version 2

Starts with a mid-shot of a man leaning on a wall, smoking looks like he's waiting for something, then he looks at his watch and turns camera right and walks parallel to a panning shot until he reaches the alley, about a 5 second walk. As he reaches the alley the shot changes to a close-mid-shot of him from the POV of the alley, as he enters the alley, the shot stays in focus (no zoom) but moves backwards to reveal a car and one man standing by on the right hand side of the shot. once the shot has revealed both characters well the shot will stop moving and stay where it is to reveal the car right door opening (car front facing camera, door on the right hand side of screen) then a man leaving the door and shutting it. the shot then changes to a shot facing the right hand side of car having the first 2 men on the left hand side of the screen and the third man walking from right to left with the camera not moving. the camera then changes to a close-shot of the three men together dominating the screen with the camera being placed at the back left of the car having man 2 in the middle, man 1 on right of screen and nearest to camera with man 3 left and furthest from camera, then after likely dialogue and man 2 placing his hand on the boot, the camera changes to a dark screen for no more than 0.5 seconds with it appearing that the camera angle is from the POV of the boot, with it opening revealing the 3 men (make sure that they have stayed in place (continuity). they then discuss main part of the scene (dialogue yet to be finalized) then when dialogue has finished, then the boot is shut(emphasis on the diagetic sound of the boot shutting) and shot changes back to the same one as before, the shot of the right of the car, man 3 then returns to his car as before with man 2 getting in the passenger seat, walking about a metre behind man 1 so both are seen on screen (man 3 not covering him) and then the shot pans to man 1 leaving screen left. mid-way through him leaving the shot changes to show his front and him walking towards the camera, he then turns screen left (opposite sid to where he came in) with the camera turning steady and him walking away but with the camera stayin stil, and the screen gradually fading to black. The end